The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the future development of an office building

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to its present layout.

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, it can be seen that more zones will be indicated for officers and the

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grasslands will be used mostly for people to sit and meet. Looking at the existing layout, as you walk

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the entrance, the first thing you see is the bathroom in front of the stockroom.

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the hall is divided into

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parts by a corridor, there are four offices on the left with the kitchen, canteen, and stockroom

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the opposite. It is

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noticed that the

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outside grass areas

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at the West and the East of

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building and there is another entrance on the West where staff can enter

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. As the future plan proposed, the enormous difference will take place in

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building.

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, the main entrance is intended to be relocated to the middle of

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office rooms in the South of the building, facing the other

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office rooms which are the replacement of the old kitchen and canteen. The

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side grass

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will be converted into an inside meeting

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with a coffee machine and the toilet will be moved

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newly built enclosure. The left-hand side grass

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will now have seating added in order to create an outdoor activity

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for the staff.