In your opinion, do you think that all children should be taught in a school environment? Say why you think home-schooling would not be a good idea and also point out some benefits for this chosen form of education.
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higher
schools
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children
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Moreover
, they are less distracted at home because children are known to lose their concentration easily, like chatting with others and using mobiles in class, if they are not consistently monitored by the teachers
; which, is again, not feasible for teachers
to do so in classes with a large number of pupils.
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the expertise
teachers
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