In your opinion, do you think that all children should be taught in a school environment? Say why you think home-schooling would not be a good idea and also point out some benefits for this chosen form of education.

Some people believe that private tutoring at

homes

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is more beneficial because of its ability to offer more attention and a better environment for studies. Despite

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,

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believe that the contemporary

schools

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, the specialists and infrastructure attuned

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education, cannot be duplicated at

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and is a far better choice. The biggest advantage of

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home oriented

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training is that it offers focused learning and less distracting.

Students to educators

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ratio is

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in

schools

, which means that

teachers

can not

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undivided attention to every

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.

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education provides

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increased guidance to students which helps in clearing their doubts easily to understand difficult subjects.

Moreover

, they are less distracted at home because children are known to lose their concentration easily, like chatting with others and using mobiles in class, if they are not consistently monitored by the

teachers

; which, is again, not feasible for

teachers

to do so in classes with a large number of pupils.

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, in spite of

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traditional

schools

are still superior compared to private tutoring and

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of

teachers

cannot be replicated at home. What

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mean, is that it is financially burdensome for parents to use all the technology and techniques of edification employed at

schools

.

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, the libraries at school have

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of

paper based

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study materials which will be an expensive pursuit for parents to provide the same at

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because of their financial constraints.

Also

, parents cannot match the skills of

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who have

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years of experience and are

specialist

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in using

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sophisticated tools of teaching. In conclusion, It's true that

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tutoring at

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is less disruptive and gives more attention to kids, but skilled educators and facilities at traditional education institutes

outweighs

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the benefits.