You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: Say that you liked their photos of your family Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event Give them the details of the event.
Dear sir
Actually, I am writing
this
letter to you related to my family photo's
in the album that I saw today. Some of my photos with my Change the noun form
photos
photo
grandparent's
in the album really touched the core of my heart as I was extremely close to them and I Correct your spelling
grandparents
charished
them the most. Correct your spelling
cherished
cherish
While
looking the
photos my eyes were full of tears as they Change preposition
at the
look
so realistic that I felt my grandparents Wrong verb form
looked
are
going to come out of that because they Wrong verb form
were
are
no more with me. Wrong verb form
were
Moreover
, the view as well as
the angle of the pics was quite addorable because taking photos in this
way,
is not a cup of tea for every person. As, I was enjoying the beauty of Remove the comma
apply
picture
meanwhile, at the bottom of Correct article usage
the picture
page
, I saw that it was clicked by Dbcphotocollections, Toronto.
Well, my family members are going to Correct article usage
the page
oragnise
a really huge Correct your spelling
organise
organize
fuction
Correct your spelling
function
on
my older brother's marriage and they are inviting various Change preposition
for
bollywood
actors and singers Change the capitalization
Bollywood
on
that. Change preposition
to
i
have been given the responsibility Change the capitalization
I
to arrange
everything including Change preposition
of arranging
venue
and photographers. Correct article usage
the venue
Therefore
, keeping in my
mind your great photography skills, I would like you to bear Correct pronoun usage
apply
responsibility
of Add an article
the responsibility
camera
on your shoulders during Correct article usage
the camera
this
function.
Well, this
special day is going to be organised on Wednesday, January,
10, 2024 at the sunset point, Collingwood, ON. Remove the comma
apply
Hence
, I will be looking forward for
your reply. If you accept my offer, I would really appreciate that.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Change preposition
to
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task response
Provide specific details about the family event and the role you want the photographer to play
coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal greeting and closing for a letter to a professional photographer
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more precise and appropriate words
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation to improve overall coherence and accuracy
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.