The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.

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The above information has described the sales

volume

from different regions and

prices for Coco-Cola, For the sales

volume

, the pie chart depicts the

overall

Coco-Cola'

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Coco-Cola

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unit case

volume

and

divides

Wrong verb form

is divided

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into regions

such

as Asia, Europe, Africa and

Middle

Correct article usage

the Middle

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East, Latin America and North America. The result shows that the total sales

volume

is 17.1 billion

while

North America, with

the

Correct article usage

show examples

record of 30.4%, demonstrates the highest percentage among the other regions.

In addition

, the Africa and Middle East which only

score

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scored

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7.0%

becomes

Wrong verb form

became

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the

region

Fix the agreement mistake

regions

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having the least

Coca-Cola

volume

. For the

price, the graph contributes

the

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to the

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trend of

Coca-Cola

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Coca-Cola's

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price from 1996 to 2001. The results imply that

Coca-Cola

Correct article usage

the Coca-Cola

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price curve is unpredictable and floating.

While

increases

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increased

show examples

from 1996 to 1997 and

decreases

Wrong verb form

decreased

show examples

in the middle year of 1997,

yet

Correct word choice

apply

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attains

Wrong verb form

attained

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its maximum point at around $80 in 1998.

Neertheless

Correct your spelling

Nevertheless

, it continues to drop and attain its lowest record around $48 nearly 2000.

Although

Coca-Cola

starts

Wrong verb form

started

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to rebound

but

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apply

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it still

end

Wrong verb form

ended

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up with a

deceasing

Correct your spelling

decreasing

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curve.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words volume, share, coca-cola with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

176 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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