The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart

shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people

think the costs of adult education should be shared.

Write a report for a university lecturer
The graphs provide the results of a survey conducted on adult education about the reasons why adults pursue
further
studies,
along with
how the
fund
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for
the
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education should be distributed.
Overall
, the survey reveals that adults pursue
further
studies mainly
due to
their interest in the subject matter and the need to acquire certifications.
In addition
, the distribution of the costs
fairly
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similar
each
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other. The primary reason for adults pursuing
further
studies is their interest in the subject, with 40
respondents
indicating
this
as their motivation.
Additionally
, 38
respondents
mentioned the need to acquire certifications as a driving factor. Other reasons for pursuing
further
education include its benefits for their current job (22
respondents
), increasing career opportunities (20
respondents
), and personal enjoyment of studying (20
respondents
). A smaller proportion of
respondents
(12) expressed the desire for career switch flexibility,
while
only 9
respondents
mentioned the opportunity to meet new people as a reason The majority of the
respondents
(40%) indicated that the costs should be borne by
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themselves. Followed by 35% of the
respondents
believed that the fund should be covered by employers,
while
25% felt that taxpayers should contribute.
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