The three pie charts present the changes in annual expenditure by local authorities in Someland between 1980 and 2000.

The three pie charts present the changes in annual expenditure by local authorities in Someland between 1980 and 2000.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three pie charts present the changes in annual expenditure by local authorities in Someland between 1980 and 2000.
The three pie charts illustrate how were increased and decreased the annual expenses of
government
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the government
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in
Someland
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Homeland
. First of all we need to pay attention, that in all periods the share of common education costs was over 55 per
cent
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-
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perfect. But
unfortunately
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unfortunately,
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we observe the negative tendentious - in 1980 it was a hefty sixty, in nineteen ninety a massive
sixty five
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sixty-five
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. And in 2000
was
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there was
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the
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a
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fall till the amount
fewer
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was fewer
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than in
first
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the first
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years. The similar tendency we can see with Health and human resources. Just under 15 per
cent
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in the beginning year,
than
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then
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the
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they
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grow up to the one fifth and after the drop on the half. The
approximately
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changes were with the transportation outcomes, just over fifteen per
cent
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firstly
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, after the plummet to a modest
one twentieth
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one-twentieth
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and
than
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then
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the jump to close one quarter. In spite of fluctuations in all
statements
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statements,
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the Environmental services had
the
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a
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slightly
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rise during all years. The figures were four per
cent
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, 5 and just under ten.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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