Even though globalization affects, the world economy in a positive manner, it has a lot of negative as well. Do you agree or disagree?
Despite having advent globalization leads to an increment in the economy. Our society become modernised, and it creates some negative results on the world
such
as decreasing cultural values and competition in every sector. I would like to take the middle ground in this
essay.
To shed some light on the positive outcome of global harmony, Firstly
, the import-export system is modernised and simplified. By this
, I mean that people in this
present time sell their products in any corner of the world. Thus
, no country has to face a lack of goods. As a result
, local sellers get more sources to increase their income. Another reason would be the young generation has more opportunities for studying and making a career. For example
, youngsters nowadays travel to foreign lands for their studies and they also
start their business at any place in the world.
Conversely
, It also
causes detrimental reactions on
mankind. Local products are fading away from the market and humans like branded things Change preposition
in
due to
global proliferation. Along with
this
, a person has to pay more in order to purchase foreign things. For Instance
, in India local public made handmade Patola and Bandhani clothes but their citizens like to wear foreign and branded clothes. Therefore
, they spend their money on international things instead
of local products. Besides
, people are well-known about other cultures so they try to imitate other people and lose their own locality.
To conclude
, worldwide development creates many positive benefits in society like, increasing facilities and modernization but we can not deny it creates some negative effects also
. Ergo, I take a partial view in this
essay.Submitted by kaverigoti2209 on
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task achievement
Ensure your introduction clearly outlines your stand on the topic. Taking a middle ground is fine, but clearly state you agree with both positive and negative aspects.
task achievement
In the body paragraphs, provide more specific examples and detailed explanations to better support your arguments.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph deals with only one main point for better coherence.
coherence cohesion
Use more linking words and phrases for a smoother flow between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
The essay addresses both positive and negative aspects of globalization, showing a balanced perspective.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the essay is logical, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
task achievement
The examples provided, such as the one about local public making handmade clothes in India, are relevant and help to illustrate your points.