Even though globalization affects, the world economy in a positive manner, it has a lot of negative as well. Do you agree or disagree?

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Despite having advent globalization leads to an increment in the economy. Our society become modernised, and it creates some negative results on the world

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as decreasing cultural values and competition in every sector. I would like to take the middle ground in

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essay. To shed some light on the positive outcome of global harmony,

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, the import-export system is modernised and simplified. By

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, I mean that people in

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present time sell their products in any corner of the world.

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, no country has to face a lack of goods.

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, local sellers get more sources to increase their income. Another reason would be the young generation has more opportunities for studying and making a career.

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, youngsters nowadays travel to foreign lands for their studies and they

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start their business at any place in the world.

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causes detrimental reactions

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mankind. Local products are fading away from the market and humans like branded things

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global proliferation.

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, a person has to pay more in order to purchase foreign things.

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, in India local public made handmade Patola and Bandhani clothes but their citizens like to wear foreign and branded clothes.

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, they spend their money on international things

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of local products.

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, people are well-known about other cultures so they try to imitate other people and lose their own locality.

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, worldwide development creates many positive benefits in society like, increasing facilities and modernization but we can not deny it creates some negative effects

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. Ergo, I take a partial view in

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essay.

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Ensure your introduction clearly outlines your stand on the topic. Taking a middle ground is fine, but clearly state you agree with both positive and negative aspects.

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In the body paragraphs, provide more specific examples and detailed explanations to better support your arguments.

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Ensure each paragraph deals with only one main point for better coherence.

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Use more linking words and phrases for a smoother flow between sentences and paragraphs.

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The essay addresses both positive and negative aspects of globalization, showing a balanced perspective.

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The structure of the essay is logical, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.

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The examples provided, such as the one about local public making handmade clothes in India, are relevant and help to illustrate your points.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

272 words

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Even though globalization affects, the world economy in a positive manner, it has a lot of negative as well. Do you agree or disagree?

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