The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The pie chart illustrates the direction of Anthropology undegraded students after graduation from one particular university
while
the table presents the income of Anthropology
graduates
who are in labour markets for five years. Looking for more details on the pie chart, the highest proportion of the
graduates
belongs to working in full-time jobs for 52%. The following direction consists of working part-time and unpresented information of their destination, it accounted for 15 and 12% respectively.
However
, there is 8% of the
graduates
studying full-time for
further
education. The lowest ratio is attributed to
graduates
who work part-time and study master's degree simultaneously at only 5%. To consider the earnings rate of 5-year experience Anthropology
graduates
per occupation, the majority of
graduates
who work in government sectors reach the highest ratio of income of more than ten-
thousand
dollars
for 50% and there is only 5% achieve twenty-five
thousand
to less than fifty
thousand
dollars
.
While
freelance consultants receive not less than ten
thousand
dollars
for 40% and 5% earning twenty-five
thousand
to less than fifty
thousand
dollars
. The lowest proportion of wages of more than ten
thousand
thousand
dollars
belongs to people working at private companies at 30%,
however
, it is merely 10% to earn twenty-five
thousand
to less than fifty
thousand
dollars
.
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