You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the average CO2 emission per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, in two of the countries
emissions
increased
while
in the remaining two they decreased;
moreover
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every country's final
emissions
were between 5 and 10 metric
tonnes
The greatest growth happened in Portugal, where the
emissions
started at approximately 1 metric tonne in 1967 and had a steady increase to almost 6 metric
tonnes
in 2007. The other growth that took place during the presented period was the one which Italy experienced. Italians started with a jump of 2 metric
tonnes
during the first 10 years and continued to grow
steadly
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steadily
until 1997 when the
emissions
remained constant at almost 8 metric
tonnes
.
While
the
Uk
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UK
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has had a steady and slight decline throughout the entire duration of the given period,
Sweden'
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Sweden
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s
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's
emissions
experienced exactly the opposite. The average carbon dioxide
emissions
per person were almost at 9 metric
tonnes
in 1967, and
next
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they spiked to nearly 11 metric
tonnes
in 1977. Despite that notable jump,
emissions
continuously fell, dropping to 5.5 metric
tonnes
per person in 2007, matching
Sweden' s
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average
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "jump" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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