The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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of Foreign

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who held from

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and their proportion in

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Market from the

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1985 to the

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1995.

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with, the

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of

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who travelled abroad as

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were

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around 5

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in the

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1985. The

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of

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tourists

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in the world increased at a constant rate from the

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1985 to 1990. Later in 1991, the

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of

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tourist

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declined from around 11

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in 1990 to approximately 10.5

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in 1991.

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, in 1992 and 1993 , the

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of

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who

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from

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were

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equivalent to around 12

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. In the

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1995, the

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of

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tourists

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were

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highest

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the highest

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, crossing a figure of 15

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of

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tourists

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.

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's share of

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's

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market increased exponentially from 2% in 1985 to around 5% in 1988. In the

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1989, the percentage of

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Japan

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tourists

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in

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dropped to around 4%. From the

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1989 to the

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1993, the percentage of

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tourist

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in

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increased in a linear proportion, Gradually, from around 4% in the

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1989 to more than 6% in the

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1993. And in 1994, the proportion of

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Tourists

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in

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dropped to around 6%. In Conclusion, the

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of

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tourists

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in the world increased from the

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1985 to 1995.The percentage of

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's share of

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's

tourist

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market

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increased from the

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1985 to the

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1995.