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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The graph given above represents the
number
 of Foreign
Tourists
 who held from
Japan
 and their proportion in
Australian
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the Australian
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 Market from the
year
 1985 to the
year
 1995.
To begin
 with, the
number
 of
Japanese
 who travelled abroad as
tourists
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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 around 5
million
 in the
year
 1985. The
number
 of
Japanese
tourists
 in the world increased at a constant rate from the
year
 1985 to 1990. Later in 1991, the
number
 of
tourist
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tourists
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 declined from around 11
million
 in 1990 to approximately 10.5
million
 in 1991.
Furthermore
, in 1992 and 1993 , the
number
 of
tourist
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tourists
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 who
were
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was
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 from
Japan
were
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was
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 equivalent to around 12
million
. In the
year
 1995, the
number
 of
Japanese
tourists
were
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was
show examples
highest
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the highest
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, crossing a figure of 15
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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tourists
.
Australia
's share of
Japan
's
Tourist
 market increased exponentially from 2% in 1985 to around 5% in 1988. In the
year
 1989, the percentage of
Japan
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Japanese
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tourists
 in
Australia
 dropped to around 4%. From the
year
 1989 to the
year
 1993, the percentage of
Japanese
tourist
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tourists
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 in
Australia
 increased in a linear proportion, Gradually, from around 4% in the
year
 1989 to more than 6% in the
year
 1993. And in 1994, the proportion of
Japanese
Tourists
 in
Australia
 dropped to around 6%. In Conclusion, the
number
 of
Japanese
tourists
 in the world increased from the
year
 1985 to 1995.The percentage of
Australia
's share of
Japan
's
tourist
 market
also
 increased from the
year
 1985 to the
year
 1995.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, japan, year, japanese, million, tourist, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.
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