The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity

is a rampant issue

that is

plaguing our society. There

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been numerous studies proving that

obesity

is the cause

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many health problems. I personally disagree with introducing more physical education in school. Looking into the weak correlation between a child's education and their health habits, we can deduce the real problem at hand, and I will discuss that in the following paragraphs. Globally,

obesity

is the cause of death for many people, and as of now, it is starting to become normalised.

Obesity

may extend to your loved ones including the elderly and

children

. One solution might be to introduce physical education to put a stop to

this

problem, but

that is

not quite adequate. It is not as simple as adding additional weight to our future generations. Educating

children

may be very complicated indeed, and

that is

the reason that I disagree. Most

children

nowadays live a sedentary lifestyle,

such

as engaging in their social media applications or sitting at home all day playing video games.

That is

why

this

issue is much broader than just a school syllabus, but there is a solution to

this

; we must first educate the parents about unhealthy habits and how to stop the

children

's addiction to technology.

Then

, educate the

children

about how to live a healthy lifestyle. In the end, stopping

obesity

surely is no simple task, but it will be something that we, as a society. must attempt to cease immediately. To save our future generations and lead them to a more fulfilling and healthier life, it is of paramount importance that we stand together and say no to sedentary lifestyles.