The graph and bart chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa

The bar chart presents the average

rainfall

while

the line graph shows the average

temperature

both

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per month in one area of East Africa.

Overall

,

rainfall

in April is the highest

among

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all months.

Additionally

, the lowest average

temperature

was captured in July.

Furthermore

, both

rainfall

and

temperature

showed the same fluctuation when the

temperature

is high the

rainfall

also

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high.

In

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the beginning of the year in January, the average

rainfall

began

with

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about 25 Millimetres

,

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and

then

increased to reach the highest amount with more than 250 Millimetres in April.

However

, after it reached the peak the average

rainfall

faced a significant decline and ended up with less than 10 Millimetres.

On the other hand

, the average

temperature

showed similar oscillation. In

the

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March, it reached the highest

temperature

with

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approximately 23.5

degree

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and decreased to

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less than 20.5 in July.

Moreover

, after July the the

temperature

degree jumped to reach 23.5 in October.