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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.
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The maps illustrate the changes made to the Spanish
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 of Castellon from 2000 until today.
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, the entire surrounding area of the coastal town has seen significant improvements in new facilities, buildings, and pedestrian paths. Looking at the map of Castellon in 2000, the region located among the seaport and access road remained largely undeveloped and is now occupied with newly-built buildings
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 as a cinema, bars, and clubs along the coast.
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, the access road has completely changed the function of a pedestrian. The
city
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center
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 has remained in the same spot, and a tram line connects them. At present, the
city
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 has undertaken a bike rental scheme. A new shop has replaced the previous market on the left-hand corner, and a new covered market has been relocated to the opposite side.
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, Castellon has recently constructed a new train station and airport, despite still being finished. To the northwest of the
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, they replaced a train station with a new police station, completed a hall of residence next to it, and removed the forest to construct the new shopping
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, center with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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