The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offense (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female culprits sorted by their crimes between 2008 and 2009. In general, it is clearly seen that people tended to act violently against the person, theft and handling stolen goods
while
experiencing low crime rates in robbery fraud and forgery.
To begin
with, the percentage of violence against the person by males and females accounted for approximately 31 per cent
and 34 per cent
, respectively. Moreover
, the rate of females eclipsed males in arrests by theft and handling stolen goods with having 14 per cent
difference (32 per cent
and 20 per cent
) in rate.
With regards to the proportion of people who were arrested by
robbery, burglary, drug offences fraud and forgery hit bottom rock, accounting for about 3 per Change preposition
for
cent
, 5 per cent
and 8 per cent
, 3 per cent
for all genders with the respective.
Regarding the rate of criminal damage and other offences, the percentage of people who were arrested by criminal damage and other offences comprised ten one of the total number and 15 per cent
, respectively while
having only a 2 per cent
discrepancy between gender groups for each arrest type.Submitted by yusifakhmad on
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