The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.

The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.
The diagram compares the
food
price index with the average price of a barrel of
oil
over the world between 2000 and 2011.
It is clear that
there was an
overall
upward trend for both global
prices
of
food
and
oil
over a period of 11 years.
Furthermore
, both
prices
increased very
similarly
and their correlation was about 93% It is clear from the graph that the figures for both increased slightly in the six first years.
However
,
oil
cost rose sharply from 60
dollars
in 2007 and peaked at 130
dollars
in 2008 and
as a consequence
, the
food
cost
also
followed but did not peak until later. But suddenly,
prices
of
oil
fell to 40
dollars
in the next year and
food
was 140 points compared with 221 points in the previous year. In the
last
two years, the
prices
grew again but the
food
cost reached a peak of nearly 240 points
this
time
while
the
oil
was around 100
dollars
.
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