In order to improve a country’s education system, high school students should be encouraged to publicly critique their teachers online. Do you agree with this? What are some other ways high school education could be improved
Some people argue that
teachers
should be evaluated online publicly in order to enhance the education system at high schools in some regions of the world. This
essay totally disagrees with this
method
on the grounds that It will reduce the motivation and work performance of teachers
. Many solutions can be performed, two of which are to change the teaching methods and increase
the capability of the teachers
in teaching
Giving public critique online to teachers
by students
in senior or junior high school is an idea that is
far from a wise method
because this
condition will impact teachers
' motivation in teaching students
. another reason is this
action is opposite to the academic freedom of a teacher in which academic freedom gives the teacher to explore and find some innovation in the learning process. If educators are prohibited from their academic freedom, it will affect their work performance and as a result
, it will reduce the quality of work. For example
, a biology teacher after being publicly critiqued online, finds a lack of motivation to teach the pupils. Eventually, he loses the quality of teaching which is essential for students
.
For this
type of problem, the main solution is the rule maker in higher education can change the curriculum in teaching by making the method
more interesting. For example
, teachers
in senior high school can provide games which are enjoyed by teenage students
. That game consists of materials about the subject making students
more understanding of the topics given. To create a good method
, one way to improve it is by providing the teachers
with training or giving them short courses to increase
their capability in teaching. These are two ways to increase
the teaching method
.
In conclusion, Rather than giving online criticism publicly, it's better to improve the method
of teaching and give teachers
an opportunity to conduct a short course to increase
the capability in teaching higher students
in terms of improving a country’s education systemSubmitted by musa.nuwa on
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