The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the prossess of making instant
noodles
.
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Overall
, manufacturing Linking Words
noodles
is an eight stages process which starts from storaging and ends with labelling and sealing of the Use synonyms
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cups.
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Initially
,the flour which is made by famers is received by truckes and that flour is stored in storage silos. After being stored, flour is mixed with water and oil by using mixer. Linking Words
Subsequently
, dough sheets are made by rollers and that are go through a machine. After that, dough strips are made and dough strips become Linking Words
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discs. After Use synonyms
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discs have been produced, its are cooked with oil and dried in the same stage.
Next step is adding vegetables and spices. Cooked and dried Use synonyms
noodles
are filled into cups, meanwhile vegitables and spices are mixed with it. Final step is labelling and sealing. Before being released to the market, produced noodle cups are needed to label and seal. After finishing Use synonyms
this
successful process, custermers will be able to consume healthy and clean production whenever they want to buy from the market.Linking Words
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