The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how many movies were produced in five nations, namely A,
B
,
C
, D and
E
from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
,
country
A registered the highest
numbers
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number
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of
films
in 3 years compared to that of other remaining countries. Another noteworthy feature is that
while
there was an upward tendency of film
number
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numbers
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in
country
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countries
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B
,
C
and
E
, a downward trend was seen in
case
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the case
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of
country
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countries
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A and D, between 2007 and 2009. In 2007, about 50, 8 and 9
films
were produced in
country
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countries
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B
,
C
and
E
, respectively. When it comes to
country
B
,
this
figure rose to 70.
Moreover
, we can
also
notice that there was a slight increase in
country
C
and
E
with 19 and 11
films
, respectively, in the year 2009. A
contrast
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trend was seen in
country
A. In 2007,
country
A produced approximately 88 movies.
This
figure remained stable in 2008 before dropping slightly to 80
films
in the year 2009. The number of
films
produced in
country
D
was fluctuated
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. There were about 15
films
produced in 2007. After that,
this
number decreased to about 9
films
before rising again to reach about 13 movies by the year 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, c, e, country, films with synonyms.
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