you are living in a university residence , and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus retaurant which opens until might . Write letter to governor describing problem : complain about the situation say why this is problem and propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that there is noise pollution around Saigon University. I am a student who is living in a university residence. Currently, my friends and I are disrupted by extreme noises
such
as singing, speaking and laughing around 7 pm upward by a new campus restaurant which opens until mid night
.
As you know, after a hard working day at school, we need quiet time to rest and to do our projects or homework. I understand that it's certainly not peaceful like a villa in a food service place. Correct your spelling
midnight
However
, we cannot concentrate on my
work because of the loud activities from the restaurants.
I request that the government can have appropriate solutions to help to reduce the noise which is the big issue here. Correct pronoun usage
our
For example
, the restaurant will have limited hours or they need to use materials which can prevent noise.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
VanSubmitted by yeshomeclass on
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The letter needs to more fully detail the extent of the disruption, perhaps including specific instances when the noise was especially problematic.
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