You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

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Dear Ann, I hope all is well with you. I apologise for not attending your birthday party. I know that you would have been disappointed, but allow me to tell you the reason why did I miss it. Unfortunately, my grandfather was hospitalised because of his illness so my dad insisted I take care of him the whole day as he had important work at the office. I was unable to deny his request because you know that we don't have anyone else to rely on with
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, there is nothing to worry about as he is perfectly fine now and we discharged him a few days ago. So, I am planning to arrange a special dinner at our favourite restaurant on 18th December to make up for missing the party. What do you think? Please let me know if can make it so I can confirm the table reservation. once again
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am sorry , see you soon. Take care. Your's lovely, Jeevit
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task achievement
For task achievement, ensure to fully develop each point. The reason for missing the party and making up for it could be elaborated.
coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, work on the logical flow of the letter, and use paragraphs to separate different ideas effectively.
greeting and closing
To improve the greeting and closing, always start with 'Dear [Name]' and end with a proper closing such as 'Kind regards' or 'Warm wishes', followed by your name.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph should contain a single clear idea, and transitions should be used to connect paragraphs smoothly.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a suitable tone for an informal letter; casual language is acceptable, but avoid over-colloquialisms and maintain politeness.
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