The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph gives information about the
number
of shop closures and openings between 2011 and 2018.
It is clear that
during the period there were some fluctuations. In addition
, in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
there were a significant Add a comma
period,
number
of new shopping stores
. However
, the trend of closing shops was higher than opening new stores
in the final year.
In 2011, just over 9000 shopping facilities were opened, compared to nearly 6000 closures of stores
. Following 3 years, the number
of shop
closing down and openings accounted for just under 7000. In the year 2015, the figures for openings and closed Fix the agreement mistake
shops
stores
dramatically decreased, constituted
about 4000 and 1000 respectively.
From 2016 to 2017, the trends for both closing and opening shop facilities were stable. Wrong verb form
constituting
In contrast
, there was a slight decrease in the number
of closed stores
, the figure has
reached approximately 3000 shops in 2018. Unnecessary verb
apply
While
,
the Remove the comma
apply
number
of opened stores
made up 5000 shops.Submitted by nuraiorynbassar07 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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