The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The line chart shows how many people
visit
a particular Caribbean Wrong verb form
visited
island
between Use synonyms
from
2010 to 2017.
In 2010, the number of Change preposition
apply
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
was larger than Add an article
the island
visitors
staying on cruise ships between 0.75 Use synonyms
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millions
and 0.25 Change to singular
million
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millions
, and the total number of Change to singular
million
visitors
was 1 million. Use synonyms
Visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
stayed stable at 0.75 Correct article usage
the island
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millions
from 2010 to 2011, rose to 1.5 Change to singular
million
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millions
for 2 years, and still remained stable at 1.5 Change to singular
million
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millions
between 2013 and 2015. Tourists staying on Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
island
slightly dropped to 1.25 Correct article usage
the island
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millions
in 2016 and Change to singular
million
then
increased to 1.5 Linking Words
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millions
in 2017. Change to singular
million
However
, fewer Linking Words
visitors
staying on cruise ships had some fluctuations between 2010 and 2013, the figure grew considerably to 2 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
for 4 years.
Change to singular
million
Overall
, the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean Linking Words
island
experienced an increasing trend for seven years Use synonyms
Visitors
staying on cruise ships increased dramatically Use synonyms
untill
it Correct your spelling
until
above
the Add a missing verb
was above
people
staying on Correct quantifier usage
number of people
Use synonyms
island
in 2017.Add an article
an island
the island
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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