the table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money came from and the chart shows how it was distributed
The table expresses the
police
budget
in the given years and the pie chart displays how the money was spent.
The figure
for national
government accounted for 175.5m and it was highest in 2017. Other sources accounted for 38m. It and the Correct article usage
the national
figure
for local taxes had a big gab
of 53.2m. Correct your spelling
gap
Total
for the Correct article usage
The total
police
budget
was 304.7m. In 2018, the police
budget
of national
government had Add an article
the national
n
slight increase of 2.5m. Correct determiner usage
a
By contrast
, local taxes went up to 102.3m. The total budget
was 318.6m
In 2017, 75% money spent
Add a missing verb
was spent
salaries
. The percentage of buildings and transport was 17% and it and the Change preposition
on salaries
figure
for salaries
had a big gab
of 58%. The lowest Correct your spelling
gap
figure
was technology, at 8%. By contrast
, the figure
for salaries
decreased to 69% in 2018. Interestingly, Buildings and transport was
the same percentage. The Correct subject-verb agreement
were
figure
for technology increased to 14%.
In brief, all
Correct determiner usage
the
police
budget
went up in 2017. The figure
for salaries
was the highest in 2017 and 2018.Submitted by pobbywang on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, figure, m, salaries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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