The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.
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The
line
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graph demonstrates the causes of moving folks away to other major cities of a particular country between 2000 and 2015.
overall
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, we can see, that the two main reasons would be employment and
study
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and family or friends and relocating for
adventure
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have a modest effect.
According to
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the information that the
line
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chart gives us,
study
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and employment lines were increasing until 2010 but in 2015 the rate of people who moved away decreased and it reached the peak of the
study
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line
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which means both of them show a common number in 2015, about 87000.
However
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, fewer individuals went to capital cities for life
due to
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their families or friends, and
adventure
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whilst they were going up to steady pace, and they show a similar proportion in 2010, which indicates a lower quantity of a few over 10000,
nevertheless
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, in 2015 represent two different numbers, the
line
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related to family and friend went up to around 22000 and the
adventure
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line
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raised to 15000.
To sum up
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, we are informed that
study
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and employment have a significant impact on moving people to big cities and relatives and
adventure
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had a slight effect.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, study, adventure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • relocation
  • migration
  • employment opportunities
  • educational facilities
  • vibrant lifestyle
  • healthcare access
  • medical services
  • social connections
  • infrastructure
  • transport facilities
  • data trends
  • survey results
  • capital city
  • allure
  • motivating factor
  • influencing
  • attracting
  • analysis
  • evaluation
  • assessment
  • consideration
  • exploration
  • introduction
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