The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the data on the amount of households in America based yearly on their income in the three mentioned years-2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, there are no differences in both five sectors over the period and the group
of people who earns
more than $100,000 tend to increase.
Correct subject-verb agreement
earn
Initially
, two groups with income under $50,000 experienced an increase to nearly $30,000. In 2015, these groups decreased slightly and reached about 27 million at the end
of the survey. It is evident that the group
with earnings between $50,000 and $74,999 remained stable over the period. Similarly
, the group
with income between $75,000 and $99,999 had no noticeable changes, just approximately 14 million.
The most significant figure is the group
with over $100,000. After having
a small decline in 2015, the number of households rose dramatically to 34 million.Unnecessary verb
apply
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