The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The line graph illustrates the average of travellers travelling to a destination on a Caribbean peninsula from 2010 to 2017. In general, it can be seen that all three lines

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tend to increase during a period from the first year until the final year.

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, the

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of

travelers

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travellers

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staying on the

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was higher than that of those who chose to stay on cruise ships. Looking at the figures in

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detail, the graph shows in the beginning year the total of

tourists

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launched to perfectly 1

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. By 2012 , the

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of

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travelled

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chose

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and chose

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to stay

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on the

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had increased to over 1

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the

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of

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staying on cruise ships just had under 0.5

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. Between 2015 and 2016, there was a slim similarity of both was 1.5

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but one obvious difference was

tourists

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staying on the

island

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decreased to 1.5

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.

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,

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increased to 1.5

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. Turning to the remaining statistics , by 2017 the total had reached a peak of 3.5

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there was a highest in three others . In the 2016 to 2017 period , the

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of visitors staying on cruise ships, staying on the

island

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increased steadily and in 2017 order difference was exactly 0.5

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.