The bar chart below gives the information about the average number of visitors in 4 other museums in London from June to October

The bar chart below gives the information about the average number of visitors in 4 other museums in London from June to October
The chart illustrates the average footfall distributions in four distinct
museums
in London from June to October.
Overall
, it is evident that all the
museums
received the highest number of visitors in August except for the Science
Museum
.
In addition
, the National
Museum
remained at the bottom in the popularity ranking throughout the period. Three out of four
museums
witnessed a dramatic increase in visitors in August. British
Museum
's footfall has soared from just above 400
thousand
in July to over 700
thousand
in August. Meanwhile, the number of museumgoers to the History and National
Museum
grew by 200
thousand
a month, reaching 600
thousand
and around 380
thousand
in August, respectively.
In contrast
, the figure for the Science
Museum
began at approximately 420
thousand
in June, dropped to 400
thousand
in July, and remained the same in August. It rose to 500
thousand
the following month but plummeted to 300
thousand
in October. The other three
museums
also
experienced a decline in footfall after reaching a pinnacle in August; notably, the British
Museum
exhibited the steepest decline, plunging to nearly 260
thousand
, less than half its August figure.
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