The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.
The graph indicates the modifications in the statistics of three different kinds of crime which happened in Newport between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
, it is explicit that robbery was the most rare form within the period.
Also
, the rate of burglary has decreased significantly. Regarding car theft and robbery, what stands out from the scheme is that the former took
placed
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more commonly; in more detail, 2700
times
in 2003 which was roughly 25
times
greater than the latter.
Moreover
, the facts and figures of car theft followed a series of fluctuations to reach approximately 2450
times
in 2012.
On the other hand
, the data of theft from people
were
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almost steady during the period, close to 500.
While
at 2005, it reached a peak of nearly 1000
times
. Focusing on burglary, it can be seen that
at
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the first year of investigation, it was in the first rank of crime, 3500
times
in 2003. Subsequent to its peak, it started to plummet
up
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to less than 1500 in 2008. Eventually,
this
trend became steady.
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