The pie charts balow show how dangeroug waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts balow show how dangeroug waste products are dealt with in three countries.
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The pie charts compare three parts of the world in terms of
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how they dispose of the
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which are wasted.
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,
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while
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Republic
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the Republic
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of
Korea
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solves
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issue
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recycling them, the best solution is burying
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the United Kingdom and
Sweden
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. With regard to laying to rest, 82% of
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products
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in the UK are got rid of in
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way
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, which is the highest in comparison to other places,
Sweden
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comes in
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second with
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55%, which is followed by the Republic of
Korea
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with its 22% of the solution for dealing with them. As for dealing with wasted
products
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through recycling, the Republic of
Korea
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recycles around
two thirds
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of them.
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Sweden
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discards them in
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way
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with its 25%, the UK solves
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problem in two approaches: in chemical treatment and dumping at sea
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of recycling. With respect to a
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of destroying
products
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by fire, a quarter of wasted
products
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in
Sweden
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is got
red
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rid
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of wasted
products
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using
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way
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. The percentages of
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for
Korea
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and the UK account for 9% and a mere 2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, korea, sweden, way with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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