The pie charts balow show how dangeroug waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts balow show how dangeroug waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The pie charts compare three parts of the world in terms of
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how they dispose of the
products
which are wasted.
Overall
,
it is clear that
while
Republic
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the Republic
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of
Korea
solves
this
issue
through
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recycling them, the best solution is burying
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the United Kingdom and
Sweden
. With regard to laying to rest, 82% of
wasting
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products
in the UK are got rid of in
this
way
, which is the highest in comparison to other places,
Sweden
comes in
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second with
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55%, which is followed by the Republic of
Korea
with its 22% of the solution for dealing with them. As for dealing with wasted
products
through recycling, the Republic of
Korea
recycles around
two thirds
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of them.
Whereas
Sweden
discards them in
this
way
with its 25%, the UK solves
this
problem in two approaches: in chemical treatment and dumping at sea
instead
of recycling. With respect to a
way
of destroying
products
by fire, a quarter of wasted
products
in
Sweden
is got
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rid
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of wasted
products
using
this
way
. The percentages of
this
for
Korea
and the UK account for 9% and a mere 2%.
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