You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart and table show the relation between income and working
hours
of each 4 jobs in the United Kingdom. Income is shown in pounds
, and working hours
are shown in hours
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that salary
of every profession slightly Correct article usage
the salary
grow
after three years of working. The average working time of all professions is nearly equal, except firefighters, who have the highest Change the verb form
grows
hours
when compared to others.
Considering the bar chart, the police
's starting income is slightly more than nurses, which is 21,000 and 18,000. When compared to the table, police
have more two work hours
than nurses, which is in the same way with salary
. Police
's salaries seem to increase at a higher rate than other jobs, which increased by 2,000 pounds
in three years while
others' increased by only 1,000 pounds
.
For the next two careers, firefighters and underground drivers have more salary
than Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
police
and nurses. For firefighters, their salary
, 40,000 pounds
in the starting year, is in line with the workload, which is beyond others, 55 hours
. In contrast
, underground drivers have the least working hours
, 36 hours
, while
they earn the highest salary
, 50,000 pounds
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, pounds, salary, police with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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