The maps show the developments which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.

The maps show the developments which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
The map illustrates the bookstore renovation from 2000 until
present
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the present
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.
Overall
,
although
there are some new features after the development, several old spots are still protected. In 2000,
the
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a
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large number of bookstore
area
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areas
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were occupied by
fiction
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the fiction
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book
section
. Meanwhile, the
others
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other
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categories
such
as art, hobbies, non-fiction and cookery were located in small
section
areas. In the past, people were
going to face
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faced
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travel
section
, new books and
service
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a service
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desk after going through the entrance, which
remain
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remains
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the same until now.
On the other hand
, there are some new improvements with
cafe
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the cafe
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and tables area. The cafe location is exactly the location where
non-fiction
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the non-fiction
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books
section
were
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was
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located in the past. Meanwhile, the tables are taking the place of art, hobbies, and cookery book
section
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sections
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which
located
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are located
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in the middle of the bookstore. The non-fiction
section
also
moved to the top right corner area which
previously
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was previously
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occupied by
fiction
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the fiction
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book
section
.
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