9/12 The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
This
chart illustrates the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
visit
to several nations Fix the agreement mistake
visits
since
1990 to 2005.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, it is clear that
every country had increased steadily over the period, Europe and America were the most popular place
for international travel, and Fix the agreement mistake
places
Middle
East was the least.
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the Middle
First,
in each nation, the trend of visit
had grown in Fix the agreement mistake
visits
this
15 years
period. Fix the agreement mistake
year
For example
, Europe was 280.2 million
in the first year, which was the highest visited nation, and it became 400.2 million
in the last
year. America was the second highest, it had 80.5 million
in 1990, which was less than one-third of Europpe's
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Europe's
visit
, and it had a stable growth to 113.2 Fix the agreement mistake
visits
in
1990 Change preposition
from
in
2005.
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to
Similiarly
, Correct your spelling
Similarly
Middle
East was 9.8 and 11.3 Correct article usage
the Middle
million
in 1990 and 1995 respectively, and the number became 15.8 million
after 15 years. Every country in the table had a steady increase, either the highest or the lowest visited nation.Submitted by chaoweikevin on
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