9/12 The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

9/12 The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
This
chart illustrates the
numbers
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number
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of
visit
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visits
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to several nations
since
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1990 to 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
every country had increased steadily over the period, Europe and America were the most popular
place
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places
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for international travel, and
Middle
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the Middle
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East was the least.
First,
in each nation, the trend of
visit
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visits
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had grown in
this
15
years
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year
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period.
For example
, Europe was 280.2
million
in the first year, which was the highest visited nation, and it became 400.2
million
in the
last
year. America was the second highest, it had 80.5
million
in 1990, which was less than one-third of
Europpe's
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Europe's
visit
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visits
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, and it had a stable growth to 113.2
in
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from
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1990
in
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2005.
Similiarly
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Similarly
,
Middle
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the Middle
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East was 9.8 and 11.3
million
in 1990 and 1995 respectively, and the number became 15.8
million
after 15 years. Every country in the table had a steady increase, either the highest or the lowest visited nation.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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