The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The graph illustrates
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statistic
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statistics
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of
household
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households
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In the US based on
income
per year in 3 periods
such
as 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the US
households
in total in each annual
income
category
have
been fluctuated
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in 2007, 2011, and 2015. In that period, the highest and the lowest number of
households
in total for each
income
category
was different. In 2007, the highest annual
income
for US
households
was more than $100,000 at 29
millions
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million
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and the lowest is $75,000 - $99,999 at 15
millions
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million
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. In 2011,
different
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situation was figured out. There was
down
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trend in 2011 for
annual
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the annual
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income
category
. The highest
income
for US
households
was $25,000 - $49,000 with 29
millions
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million
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US
households
. In 2007, the highest annual
income
for US
households
was more than $100,000 at 29
millions
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million
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and the lowest is $75,000 - $99,999 at 15
millions
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million
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. In 2011,
different
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a different
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situation was figured out. There was
down
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a downward
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trend in 2011 for
annual
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the annual
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income
category
. The highest
income
for US
households
was $25,000 - $49,000 with 29
millions
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million
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US
households
and only 13
millions
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million
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US
households
gotten
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$75,000 - $99,999
income
per year. In 2015, the
income
was better than before. The majority of US
households
approximately 33
millions
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million
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got $100,000 or more
income
per year and only 15
millions
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million
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got $75,000 - $ 99,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households, category, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figured" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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