In recent year there has been a surge in the popularity of electrical vehicles(EV's). What are the advantages and disadvantages of electric vehicles. Discuss and provide examples.
From
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In
past
few years there has been an increase in demand Correct article usage
the past
of
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for
vehicles
which are powered by batteries and in this
essay we will discuss the potential benefits and drawback
of the same.
On the positive side, Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
automobile
running on batteries are more Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
environment
friendly. Electrical Replace the word
environmentally
vehicle
uses electricity stored the
batteries attached to Change preposition
in the
that
Correct determiner usage
the
vehicle
which leads to numerous benefit to the environment, ranging from zero carbon emission, negligible
noise generated by the engines to less dependency on gas. Another advantage is, electrical Correct word choice
and negligible
vehicles
are more economical. As to run
any Wrong verb form
running
vehicle
, energy is required and as compare
to fossil fuels namely petrol, diesel, Wrong verb form
compared
natural
gas; electricity saved in the cells Correct word choice
and natural
are
the cheapest source of energy. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Furthermore
, maintenance
cost of Add an article
the maintenance
automobile
running on electricity is Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
also
less which makes them pocket friendly
to the consumers. Add a hyphen
pocket-friendly
For instance
, As per report
published by Add an article
a report
the report
leading
Correct article usage
a leading
vehicle
manufacturer
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manufacturers
of
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in
western
countries, by adopting electrical Capitalize word
Western
vehicles
people can save forty per cent more money on their travel expenses.
On the contrary
, lack
of sufficient Correct article usage
the lack
infrastructure
is the major disadvantage of using electric automobile
. We already have a planned Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
infrastructure
for the conventional automobile
but for vehicles
running on power
we are lacking behind which Add a comma
power,
possesses
a major disadvantage for the people to adopt Verb problem
poses
this
change. Another cons
is, Replace the adjective
con
electrical
Correct word choice
that electrical
vehicle
covers a shorter distance. Due to
small
capacity of the cells used in the electric Correct article usage
the small
vehicles
they cannot travel a longer distance and Add a comma
vehicles,
further
, people need to wait for longer
duration so that Correct article usage
a longer
there
Replace the word
their
automobile
are charged fully. To illustrate, Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
from
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in
last
few years it is been observed that Correct article usage
the last
due to
lack
of mandatory Correct article usage
the lack
infrastructure
for electric vehicle
, Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Correct article usage
the sale
sale
of conventional Fix the agreement mistake
sales
automobile
have increased by fifty percent.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
vehicles
running on power posses
numerous disadvantages like Correct your spelling
possess
non availability
of Add a hyphen
non-availability
infrastructure
and short
range of Correct article usage
a short
automobile
. But, slowly it will gain more popularity Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
due to
its advantages namely, environment friendly and pocket friendly
to the customers.Add a hyphen
pocket-friendly
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