The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
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The diagram illustrates the nine stages of the
plastic
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bottles
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recycling process. In brief, the process starts with collecting the
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bottles
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from the garbage can,
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and sorting
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the
bottles
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, until it is transformed into other
plastic
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products in the end. Primarily, the
plastic
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bottles
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are collected from the trash can and distributed to the recycling
center
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for the next step process. The collected
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bottles
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are sorted. Workers only picked the specific type of
plastic
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bottles
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to proceed. Meanwhile, the sorted
plastic
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bottles
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are compressed into block shapes, and it is crushed into small pieces using the grinder machine.
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, the pieces are washed with water until it is clean and set for the next production step.
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, the machine is used to produce the
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pellets from the clean
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material.
Next,
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the pellets are heated in order to form the raw material.
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, the raw materials are ready to
used
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. The factory produces other products from the raw
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material into several products, namely
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lunch boxes, water
bottle
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, pencils,
plastic
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bags,
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and even
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clothes. All of these items can be reused or
recycling
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later.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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