The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram illustrates the nine stages of the
plastic
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bottles
recycling process. In brief, the process starts with collecting the Change the noun form
bottle
plastic
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bottles
from the garbage can, Use synonyms
sorting
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and sorting
bottles
, until it is transformed into other Use synonyms
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products in the end.
Primarily, the Use synonyms
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bottles
are collected from the trash can and distributed to the recycling Use synonyms
center
for the next step process. The collected Change the spelling
centre
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bottles
are sorted. Workers only picked the specific type of Use synonyms
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to proceed. Meanwhile, the sorted Use synonyms
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are compressed into block shapes, and it is crushed into small pieces using the grinder machine. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the pieces are washed with water until it is clean and set for the next production step.
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Subsequently
, the machine is used to produce the Linking Words
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pellets from the clean Use synonyms
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material. Use synonyms
Next,
the pellets are heated in order to form the raw material. Linking Words
Finally
, the raw materials are ready to Linking Words
used
. The factory produces other products from the raw Add a missing verb
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plastic
material into several products, namely Use synonyms
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lunch boxes, water Use synonyms
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, pencils, Fix the agreement mistake
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bags, Use synonyms
even
clothes. All of these items can be reused or Correct word choice
and even
recycling
later.Change the form of the verb
recycled
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