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Writing Samples
Band 6

You lost your driving licence and someone found it and sent it back to you. Write a letter to the finder. In your letter -describe why the licence is important to you -ask where he or she found it -offer how would vou like to thank him/her

#licence #someone #finder #-describe #-ask #-offer
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Dear Sir, I hope
this
 letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing
this
 letter to thank you for returning my driver's licence that I lost
last
 week.
This
 document is very important to me
,
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 because I am a lawyer by profession and I regularly use my car to commute intercity.
Therefore
, without a driving
licence
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 I cannot
self drive
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 my vehicle, as it is against the law. In order to, be more cautious in future, it would be very kind of you if you
can
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 tell me, where
did
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you
find
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 it
?
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,
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 I do not know at what point I lost it and I failed to find it even after many efforts. I am very thankful to you for
this
 kind act and I would love to meet you in person to thank you.
Thus
, for
this
 to happen, I would love to host you over a dinner next weekend.
This
 will give me an opportunity to know you personally. I am looking forward to hearing from you on
this
. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.
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task achievement
Although the response includes most required information, adding a sentence to express gratitude at the start can enrich the opening.
coherence cohesion
Avoid unnecessary commas and improve the flow of certain sentences for better coherence.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with appropriate greeting and closing.
task achievement
The task response clearly outlines why the license is important, where it might have been found, and makes an offer of gratitude.
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