The diagram illustrates the number of shops in the situation of close and open in one country from 2011 to 2018.

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stores that were closed and opened in a particular country over the span of

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periods.

Overall

, it is explicitly observed that the unit of boutiques that were closed and opened illustrated a downward tendency. It is quite

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that, the quantity of boutiques ended

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at around 6400 units which

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fluctuated from 6000 parts to 6500 parts between the era 2012 and 2015.

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, it is crystal clear that it plunged to its lowest number in 2015,

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it noticeably rocketed to about 5200 segments of boutique by 2016 which

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concluded between the period 2016 and 2018 with a minor rise and decline. It is imperative to provide clarity that the quantity of newly opened stores peaked in 2011 at approximately 8500 denominations.

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, the constant of newly started boutiques

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plunged to 4000 segments in 2012,

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had a modest rise from the year 2012 to 2013, over and above that there was a modest drop in the quantity of opened stores by 1000 units in the year 2014. From the period 2015 to 2016 the collection of opened shops remained stable which, during the time 2016 and 2018 , concluded with a minor increase and decrease.