This diagram below shows the manufacturring process for making suger from suger cane.

The diagram below shows the production of

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Overall

, the production

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process of

sugar

is man-made and

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of 7 steps. The main equipment items are

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a combine harvester, crusher for the former process and an evaporator and centrifuge

machine

for the latter. As the diagram shows, the production of

sugar

cane starts with harvesting

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plants from the field when they are one to one and

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years old for the purpose of making

sugar

from them. They are harvested in two different ways, either manually by humans or by

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harvester

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. Afterwards, collected

sugar

canes are crushed in a grinder to produce

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juice. In the following stage, the juice is purified by the limestone filter.

Furthermore

, purified juice is heated in

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the evaporating

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machine

. During

this

stage

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stage,

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the vaporization of water creates the syrup.

Subsequently

, the syrup is poured into

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machine

to separate the

sugar

crystals. In the final stage, separated

sugar

crystals are dried and cooled in a container and

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product is

sugar

.