A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summe

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Dear ABC I hope

this

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letter finds you in the pink of health. It has been a long time since we caught up, I really miss our old days.

Last

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year in summer, I visited Leh Ladhak, India and I think

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could be a perfect place for your excursion

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year for you because you can have a campfire on the edges of the river

while

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, enjoying the barbecue near the tents.

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enjoying the beauty of nature, you can have an expedition to the local town museum as well.

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, you will

also

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find that the place seems to be extremely dirty as

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town is far away from the city and there is no recycling plant near the area

due to

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which people keep throwing their plastic waste in the river rather than in recycle bins. Well, the night beauty of

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area for campfire is undeniable but the heaps of waste make me feel miserable.

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, I am

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getting a month's summer break from my work and I would be obliged if you want me to join you and make our trip memorable forever. I will be waiting for your reply. Yours loving, Bsdf

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Task Achievement

Ensure the writing tone is consistent and appropriate for the audience - the tone in the letter occasionally shifts, which is not suitable for the IELTS task.

Coherence and Cohesion

Develop your ideas fully. Each paragraph should clearly state and expand upon a single idea, relating directly to parts of the prompt.

Coherence and Cohesion

Maintain a logical structure throughout your letter. Use connecting words to improve the flow and make the text easier to follow.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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