A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summe
Dear ABC
I hope
this
letter finds you in the pink of health. It has been a long time since we caught up, I really miss our old days. Last
year in summer, I visited Leh Ladhak, India and I think this
could be a perfect place for your excursion this
year for you because you can have a campfire on the edges of the river while
, enjoying the barbecue near the tents. Along with
enjoying the beauty of nature, you can have an expedition to the local town museum as well.
Besides
, you will also
find that the place seems to be extremely dirty as this
town is far away from the city and there is no recycling plant near the area due to
which people keep throwing their plastic waste in the river rather than in recycle bins. Well, the night beauty of this
area for campfire is undeniable but the heaps of waste make me feel miserable.
Moreover
, I am also
getting a month's summer break from my work and I would be obliged if you want me to join you and make our trip memorable forever.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Yours loving,
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Task Achievement
Ensure the writing tone is consistent and appropriate for the audience - the tone in the letter occasionally shifts, which is not suitable for the IELTS task.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop your ideas fully. Each paragraph should clearly state and expand upon a single idea, relating directly to parts of the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain a logical structure throughout your letter. Use connecting words to improve the flow and make the text easier to follow.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,