The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist

market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided charts present data on the international travel habits of
Japanese
tourists from 1985 to 1995, with a specific focus on
Australia
's portion of
this
tourism
market
. The bar chart tracking the number of
Japanese
tourists
traveling
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abroad shows a clear upward trajectory over the given period. Starting at approximately 5 million in 1985, there is a steady increase each year, with slight plateaus around 1987 and 1991. By 1995, the number
has
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almost tripled, reaching just over 15 million. In the line graph depicting
Australia
's
share
of the
Japanese
tourist
market
, there is an
overall
increase, albeit with some fluctuations. In 1985,
Australia
captured around 2% of the
market
, which
sees
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a sharp rise to approximately 4.5% in 1987.
Thereafter
, the trend
fluctuates
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fluctuated
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, dipping to just under 4% in 1988 before climbing again. The most significant growth occurs between 1991 and 1994,
where
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when
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Australia
's
share
escalates from around 3.5% to just under 6%. The graph plateaus slightly in 1995, indicating a stabilization of
market
share
. In summary, the data illustrates that over the decade, Japan saw a substantial increase in the number of its citizens
traveling
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travelling
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abroad, and concurrently,
Australia
successfully expanded its
share
of these
travelers
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travellers
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significantly, suggesting a growing preference among
Japanese
tourists for
Australia
as a travel destination during
this
period.
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