The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided charts present data on the international travel habits of
Japanese
tourists from 1985 to 1995, with a specific focus on Australia
's portion of this
tourism market
.
The bar chart tracking the number of Japanese
tourists traveling
abroad shows a clear upward trajectory over the given period. Starting at approximately 5 million in 1985, there is a steady increase each year, with slight plateaus around 1987 and 1991. By 1995, the number Change the spelling
travelling
has
almost tripled, reaching just over 15 million.
In the line graph depicting Wrong verb form
had
Australia
's share
of the Japanese
tourist market
, there is an overall
increase, albeit with some fluctuations. In 1985, Australia
captured around 2% of the market
, which sees
a sharp rise to approximately 4.5% in 1987. Wrong verb form
saw
Thereafter
, the trend fluctuates
, dipping to just under 4% in 1988 before climbing again. The most significant growth occurs between 1991 and 1994, Wrong verb form
fluctuated
where
Correct word choice
when
Australia
's share
escalates from around 3.5% to just under 6%. The graph plateaus slightly in 1995, indicating a stabilization of market
share
.
In summary, the data illustrates that over the decade, Japan saw a substantial increase in the number of its citizens traveling
abroad, and concurrently, Change the spelling
travelling
Australia
successfully expanded its share
of these travelers
significantly, suggesting a growing preference among Change the spelling
travellers
Japanese
tourists for Australia
as a travel destination during this
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