A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
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, I saw a lot of wildlife and a bunch of colourful butterflies there. If I'm not mistaken, you like them, so I'm sure you'll be satisfied.
I didn't make a proper analysis before the trip, which was a big mistake. I suffered from mosquitos the whole month, so don't forget to take some repellent with you. And... Being ready for a non-classic toilet and bathroom experience. It was the most challenging part for me.
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year, I would go camping with your family. It would be really great. Let's organize something like that next year. What do you think?
Say hi to your mom and dad! I tremendously miss her delightful cherry pie.
Hope to see you soon, buddy,
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greeting and closing
Ensure the letter starts with an appropriate greeting and ends with a suitable closing statement that clearly signals the end of the correspondence.
complete response
Expand the introduction by acknowledging the recipient's request for advice explicitly to enhance task response.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistent tone suitable for writing to a friend. Although generally good, avoid overly casual phrases or expressions.
logical structure
Organize information into clear paragraphs, each one focused on a single main idea, to improve the logical flow and readability.
single idea per paragraph
Clearly differentiate between the advantages and disadvantages of camping to make it easy to follow.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.