The chart below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

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having a trip overseas in 10 years time, starting from 1885. The line graph depicts the percentage of

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people visiting Australia.

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tourists travelling abroad increases every year, except for in 1991. The trend of the share of Australia and the trend of the

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tourists is pretty similar. The drop in the

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citizens having a trip abroad affects the share of Australia in JApa At the outset, the

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having a trip overseas was

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around 5

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gradually increased every year;

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, there was a drop occurred in 1991, which decreased from approximately 11

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to 10.5

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people.

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continued rising until reaching

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15

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reported year. As both

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Australia’s share in the

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tourist market started at merely 2 per cent, and it gradually increased until

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1989. It dropped a little from 5 per cent to around 4.25 per cent. After that, it rose again to approximately 6% in 1994. Between 1994 and 1995, it decreased, and it tended to continue decreasing.