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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties
Dear Talissa. I hope
this
 message finds you well. I am writing to you
for
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inform
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about
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you about
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 my
traveling
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travelling
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for
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 Spain in the
next
 month. The project that I have been working
in
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 the
last
 weeks was
a
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successful and I will receive a week off from my work. As we agreed
in
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 our
last
 date, you will take care
my
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 little dog Kakaroto during my time out. He is a very active pet and he likes to make some walks during the day in the park near
from
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my home. You must have to give food for him two times per day and the dishes that Kakaroto uses are in
furtinure
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furniture
 in the kitchen. I have been working
in
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 a build bike project in my apartment, so you
wiil
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will
 find some pieces in the living room. Please, I request to you do not touch
in
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 these things, because can hurt you. In the fridge, I have some beers and you can
enjoy
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! Best regards. Emerson Severo

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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