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The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the data about the
statistic
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 of automobiles
which
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apply
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produced by four different countries (
China
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, the UK, Japan,
the
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and the
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 USA) in 2020, and predicted figures for vehicles by 2035. The measurements were given in hundreds of thousands.
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, the UK, Japan, and the USA reveal a decline,
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conversely
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China
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 shows an upward trend over the entire span. Turning to the details, in 2020, nearly 350,000 cars were manufactured by Japan, and it is predicted to rise to approximately 375,000 by 2025. After that, it is expected that the sum of car production will decrease by 300,000 by 2030.
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, after 2030, it is predicted a sharp drop to 100,000 cars by 2035.On top of that, the USA and the UK car manufacturing industry will have fallen by just below 50,000 by 2035.
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, it can be seen that a considerable climb in the number of automobiles in
China
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 over the estimated time duration. In 2020, 100,000 automobiles were manufactured
by
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China
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, and after 2020, it is forecast to grow slightly by 2035.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words china with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated number of cars
  • significant change
  • stable/increase/decrease
  • comparative analysis
  • urban planning
  • environmental impact
  • trend
  • notable year
  • long-term implications
  • data pattern
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