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The maps below show changes that took place at Brighton College between 1970 and 2010.

The maps below show changes that took place at Brighton College between 1970 and 2010.
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The two maps compare the campus change and redevelopment that occurred in Brington College between 1970 and 2010.
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, The figures showed that Brighton College changed significantly over the past 40 years to become Brighton
University
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. Many student facilities,
such
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 as coffee shops, new departments, and student dorms were relocated and reconstructed during these years.
Initially
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, in 1970, the northeastern of Brighton College comprised only
University
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 Center buildings. By 2010, half of the
University
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 Center had been rebuilt into the dormitory, which was relocated from the southwestern of the campus. To the southwest of the
university
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, the Hall of Medicine changed into a coffee shop located in front of the Delapore library, and opposite the science hall, the old dormitory became the Granger School of Business.
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, in the northwestern and southern east territories, the facilities development for students remained unchanged from 1970 to 2010, including Delapore Library and the science hall.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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