You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, ⦁describe what you enjoyed about the course ⦁say how much cooking you've done since the course ⦁suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you about a short fascinating cookery
course
in your school. During my course
in the school's kitchen, I felt like in my house due to
our teacher's behaviours and positivity. They give a lot of incredible information about new approaches to new cooking techniques.
Before the course
, I did not have any experience in cooking, for example
, I could not make any special foods such
as pasta, rice etc. In addition
, at the end
of the course
, I must state that I can even make whatever I want, especially different traditional soups which I am proud of myself.
Also
, I suggest you take this
course
in my hometown, it will be full and must be enjoyable for most of them.
Furthermore
, I appreciate all of your school's organisation preparing such
a perfect course
. I'd love to stay in touch. I am waiting for your new course
to attend as soon possible.
While
I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my email as soon as possible. I will be waiting to hear from you.
If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Take care of yourself.
Kind regards,
Salih Zeki KöniSubmitted by salihzekikoni on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and that all sentences within that paragraph revolve around that central idea for better coherence.
task achievement
You have expressed your points, but for a higher score, provide more detailed instances of your experiences, specific dishes you've learned to cook, and clearer suggestions for new courses.
coherence cohesion
The letter has an adequate structure, but make sure to organize the content to present ideas in a logical sequence, ensuring smooth transitions between paragraphs.
task achievement
You have used a suitable tone for semi-formal letter writing, but you could improve by consistent use of polite expressions and avoiding overly casual language.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.