Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether the principal issues in recent years are the extinction of some species of
animals
and plants
or significant threats to the environment. While
the loss of animals
and plants
is a serious problem, I would lean towards the latter opinion. I believe that climate
change
is the most disastrous issue for humanity and the earth
.
On the one hand, many individuals believe that disappearing particular plants
and animals
on the earth
can impact our lives
drastically. For example
, when a type of vegetation disappears, an array of insects and birds that were fed on that plant will die out. consequently
, the food chain is destroyed, and due to
the lack of enough food
we will end up with famine. These days, a wide range of wildlife Add a comma
food,
animals
are endangered by extinction. As a result
, many dangerous animals
that will be eaten by disappeared species, and are hazardous to humans' lives
will emerge.
On the other hand
, in recent years we have encountered climate
change
and its detrimental impacts which threaten the chance of survival on the earth
for all species. Firstly
, extreme weather due to
climate
change
such
as hurricanes, floods, and tsunamis destroys many rural areas especially coastal areas, and financial loss. For instance
, global warming causes the retreating of natural glaciers, and then
the altitude of the seas and the oceans increases, so people who live in coastal areas lose their homes. Moreover
, global warming increases the rate of evaporation and we will face a shortage of water in the near future. Thus
, the earth
will no longer be a decent place for life as it will turn into a desert.
In conclusion, in my opinion, climate
change
can affect our lives
negatively in a way that cannot be compensated, and even threaten the lives
of animals
and plants
on the earth
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