Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether the principal issues in recent years are the extinction of some species of
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or significant threats to the environment. Use synonyms
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is a serious problem, I would lean towards the latter opinion. I believe that Use synonyms
climate
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is the most disastrous issue for humanity and the Use synonyms
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can impact our Use synonyms
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, when a type of vegetation disappears, an array of insects and birds that were fed on that plant will die out. Linking Words
consequently
, the food chain is destroyed, and Linking Words
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we will end up with famine. These days, a wide range of wildlife Add a comma
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, in recent years we have encountered Linking Words
climate
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change
and its detrimental impacts which threaten the chance of survival on the Use synonyms
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climate
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change
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as hurricanes, floods, and tsunamis destroys many rural areas especially coastal areas, and financial loss. Linking Words
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, global warming causes the retreating of natural glaciers, and Linking Words
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the altitude of the seas and the oceans increases, so people who live in coastal areas lose their homes. Linking Words
Moreover
, global warming increases the rate of evaporation and we will face a shortage of water in the near future. Linking Words
Thus
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earth
will no longer be a decent place for life as it will turn into a desert.
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climate
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change
can affect our Use synonyms
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negatively in a way that cannot be compensated, and even threaten the Use synonyms
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