The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the percentage changes in the
prices
in comparison to the previous month of all three metals copper, nickel, and zinc during 2014.
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Overall
, there is a significant fall in the proportion of the price of all three metals. Linking Words
In
the end of year 2014, all of them are near to each other.
In January, nickel Change the preposition
At
prices
were 6% which drastically fell to 1% in March and in June became negative, copper Use synonyms
prices
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also
decreased monthly, Linking Words
whereas
zinc Linking Words
prices
rose by 2% in February. Use synonyms
However
, it Linking Words
also
did not go so far because the price trend was making lower patterns.
In July, the metal Linking Words
prices
are substantially stable till September. Use synonyms
Further
, there is Linking Words
also
a slight downfall but it gets support from the market. Linking Words
At the end
of December, the fluctuation of the Linking Words
prices
were almost very close to each other copper, nickel, and zinc were at nearly 1.5%, 1%, and 2% respectively.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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