The graph below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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ratio
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the ratio
students
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school-aged
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apply
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for both Correct your spelling
overseas
gender
.
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genders
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, europe
is the significant ration for Change the capitalization
Europe
accept
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accepting
secondry
of Correct your spelling
secondary
educational
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the educational
samilar
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similar
as
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to
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Latin
as
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and
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decreased to half in Europe and the three Correct your spelling
it
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remaining
approximatly
30 and below.
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approximately
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, the most Replace the word
In the beginning
shool
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school
student
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students
Europ
which is just Correct your spelling
Europe
belowe
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below
femel
, but Correct your spelling
females
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for male
male
is just below 90. Fix the agreement mistake
males
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apply
students
decreased to half. Sub saharan africa
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Africa
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had
school aged
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number of school-aged
students
by
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apply
students
for both gender
.
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genders
Latain
America and East Asia were similar range Correct your spelling
Latin
students
which around lower than half. On the other hand
, adult shool
was fewer by about 20 % with Correct your spelling
school
note
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