The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph illustrates the number of
stores
that closed and opened in the same country between 2011 and 2018.
After Analyzing it can be seen clearly that, Turning first the total of stores
opening in 2018, stood at around 8500 at the beginning of the year then
fell dramatically to just under 4000 in 2014 but rebounded and roughly 50% in 2014 until the last
recorded year 2018. The total of opening stores
had decreased gradually to 3000 which was the lower point in the trend.
On the other hand
, stood at around 6500. The total of stores
that shut down had fluctuated before fell significantly to just under 3000 in 2015 then
rebounded dramatically to roughly 5000 until the end of the following year.Submitted by hadiashahid331 on
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